All Comments on 'The Babysitter Ch. 01: Caught'

Very well done for a 1st story. No no noticed gaffs, engaging sentence structure. Please do let us hear about the rest of their weekend.

Average and not very realistic. Moved much too fast, it needs more thought if you're going to do a second part.

Just out of curiosity.....how is the wife supposed to get home? He took the car. Truthfully though, I assumed the wife set this up with the babysitter. I thought maybe she'd come walking in (having taken a flight home) & join him in tying the sitter to the bed.

What…no mention of a completely horrified and confused Tommy watching at the door as they finish?