All Comments on 'The Bachelor Party Pub Crawl'

by Just Plain Bob

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
when you marry whores that what you get

all women aren't whores.some have higher standard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
That was actually kinda fun Bob!

I think that sets a baseline for future bachelor parties.

It was kinda low of Daphne to do what she did but not even let Monte have a stripper! If she had though, they probably would not have goten married.

Nice effort - great imagination!

Regards, DJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
another great story...

... as the title say a nother great story JPB can I come to your next party

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
didn't another author do this already?

seems i have seen this here before by another author.

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesover 16 years ago
Pub Crawl?

why start at the Landing Strip and miss Rick's and the other two just off 183? and the tits are shakin free all over Austin ... keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Your story talks of people with no real sense of

values. Christina was probably the only one there with a rational head. The wife to be was hypocritical bitch and should not have gotten married. The groom once he saw his fiance was virtually a single man again. The only trouble with this whole story is wholesale bareback sex, especially in a town such as Austin, will eventually result in HIV/AIDES the gift that keeps giving until you cant take any more. No sex is worth dying for! You take a little town like Houston, population about 5 million, only about 2.5 million are female. Discard about 1.25 million of them as to old, to young, to sick or what ever. That leaves only about 1,250,000 women to chose from. Yeah, I sure I could find ten or twelve to fall in love with and possibly marry, say I did that!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Your story talks of people with no real sense of

values. You nsee that's the problem with BOB. He has no sense of values. Don't blame him for it. It is because of the women inn his life from his great grandmother on down to his little daughter. They were all whores. I mean whores. Bob's daughter was fucking for coins by the time she was five next to her mother who was fucking the guys that did have money. Many times Bob's daughter and his wife put on shows for a convention of one hundred men. The show had Bob's women. His great grandmother, his grand mother and his mother all eating each others cunts. When the finished the sjhoe they took on all the men. They would suck the cum out of eachothers cunts and his daughter would fist two men at the same time with her little chi=ubbs hands. Think that was something. You should have seen them when they brought out ten large dogs that wwere slated to be euthanised because they had acut chronig mange. Evey their cocks were mangy but that didn't bother Bob;s family the lust lapped it up The little daughter had the smaller dogs and when they were fininhed it was dixcovered that the dogs had the clap in addition to everything else

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Don't think so

I can't imagine any man, upon seeing his intended bride being double teamed, would do anything except cancel the wedding and dump the slut. Sorry Bob, but this one just doesn't fly.

GoodhueGoodhuealmost 9 years ago
Fiction,For Sure,But Lots of Fun!

Really enjoyed this one after suspending the laws of reality while I read. Lots of juicy fuckin' and suckin' with the future slut wife even getting in on the action. I always wonder though why the twats in these stories never seem to get pregnant,especially after doing 14 guys. (No birth control pill can stand up to that kind of onslaught!) ~ Good stuff,start to finish,even if a tad hard to believe. This one gets a 5 with a bullet! (14 bullets,actually.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Although a funny tale

No one would marry a slut like that. Absolutely no one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
never could get my wife..

to tell me nor get a straight answer what she did at her pre wedding party... and she does not keep up contact to the ladies at her party...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
sounds like a set or real friends is needed

2*

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
So so

Not as bad as some.I've read from Bob.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More of the

tired Martian Slut Ray and defective cuck male tropes. Very tiresome. Bob needs TRT

dark2donut2dark2donut2over 2 years ago

Dreamland nonsense by JPB. His sex descriptions show clearly that he has no real sex and only draws ideas from porn he is probably watching.

A bride would go gangbang in front of all her acquaintances? Sure, that sounds like a college frat party or better Texas trailer park entertainment and a dreamed fantasy for JPB. In JPB world there are only "classy" women, drop dead gorgeous (all of them), and all crazy about Rob. Every one of the women he ever met spreads her legs for Rob.

Anybody wants to buy JPB's used keyboard?

ibuguseribuguserover 2 years ago

Whenever I see dark2donut2 posting his usual jpb bashing, I add 2* to my rating.

Was going for 3* now jpb gets 5.

Lol.

fishgetterfishgetteralmost 2 years ago

Skipped reading after 42DDs for her tits. Those are just gross. not even imviting unnless lost at sea after the boat sank.

TheRealMadtexTheRealMadtexalmost 2 years ago

Great story! With an ending too. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Cautionary tale

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Marriage in the US is in decline and STIs/STDs are on the up. Seems to me that the mindset of the chatacters in this story is not far from reality.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...