All Comments on 'The Bailey Sisters Get Deflowered'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You can't write effectively

See title.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Yeah, this is pretty shitty. The guy in the story is terrible in bed, which is just bad for a sex story. All he does is penetrate. I mean, that is just awful writing: He penetrated her, it hurt, abrupt ending. You need to flesh these stories out. This has to have been written by a guy who is shitty in bed and has zero imagination outaide of his own limited capabilities. Get real.

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