All Comments on 'The Ball Game'

An ar using look

Teriffic!!

This is what I'm talking about. So fucking hot!!

Fuck the Yankees

Nice to read about how son empties his balls deep inside his moms fertile womb.

A part 2 where she is pregnant !

I have to say, the build up of that story was almost too much. But your eloquence in writing and attention to the small details. Kept me captivated. I felt like I was reading a romance novel. Well done

Exceptionally well-written fantasy! Time is taken to let the eroticism build and the story is hot!

Beautifully Written. Excellent! Please keep going with many more parts

A grand slam of a story! Loved it!

geeat story love to read more.

My kind of story. I'd love to hear the same story from mom's point of view. Maybe she invites him home and makes love to him while her husband is in the next room. Even better if her husband is listening and approves.

Holy crap, this needs a part 2 please!

Fantasy….fantasy ; but a nice erotic read.

Absolutely awesome! A sequel is in order.

Nicely written- you have the gift of being very descriptive placing the reader at the scene.

Hope their adventures continue

This.,...This just may be the hottest story ive ever read on here. Amazing story line. Very thought out. Took time, give detail, didnt just jump right into it but perfectly built up to the love scene. Amazing. Would love to see what happens next.

Wanna be my new mom? Lmao

Loved it! As a Red Sox fan, I was happy to see that the Yankees lost! lol Five stars and a favorite point!

more pregnant dirty talk in the next one too, that was so hot!

As a fellow Canadian, I enjoyed every sensually favoured morsel of mother/son erotica…your creative finger tips teasing the imagination with lust filled imagery…I definitely need to pay attention to my mom…again…

Most excellent, with an absolutely deliciously described MILF, and a connection not just physical

Five for you

Loved the pregnancy/breeding talk and when mom licks it up. So hot

Great story. Very well written. The descriptions were very visual. Keep writing

Mother son stories are some of the hottest stories out there, but you add in exhibitionism and impregnation and you have a truly amazing story, normally I would complain about the over detailing of some and under detailing of other parts or the slow pace, but this could be a perfect setup to a larger series where they are able to get into it much quicker with some serious action rather than the slow rocking they needed on the bus

Need a followup to see if she really got pregnant or not.

Holy fuck that was hot .

Terrible ending after a sexy build Up. Pregnancy ruins erotica and relationships.

Next Chapter Please

Horrid body part descriptions. Honey. Plum. Helmet. Button. Just say the body parts Jesus christ lmao

ignore that 04/29/23 idiot, what a boringly uncreative world they must live in. Your story was great and I'm looking forward to any future chapters.

Enjoyable read, not sure it needed the pregnancy element to the story, but thoroughly enjoyed it. 5*

This story was hot especially with the pregnancy theme yes there is a few readers than will moan about the pregnancy but look at it the other side there are loads more readers who want the pregnancy theme so please please continue with the pregnancy theme that is what makes your stories great but it would also be nice if he succeeded on getting her pregnant

We Need The Next Chapter

Don't stop there please

Should of wrote another chapter telling if they had sex again and if she really did get pregnant does the dad find out if so what did he say or do there's just too many questions that you left with no answers you didn't have a ending you have start and middle but no ending