All Comments on 'The Banning Family Court Pt. 02'

by Gln1517

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW!!!!

This was one of the hottest fucking stories I've ever read! Well done!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Outstanding kinky writing.

Gabby is such an obedient submissive at such a young age. She enjoys being naked all the time. Perfect wife material. Youpper.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Slightly dissapointed on the path but stil 5*

The court setting is novel and very hot. I liked very much part one and hope the story stays grounded in the court, misdemenour, punishment. However I dont really care as the writing is great regardless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A wonderful young submissive.

Gabby is everything a submissive is expected to be. Uninhibited, a sweet cocksucker, enjoys deep anal and is happy to serve her family members, all in her nakedness. This writer has a kinky take on life and we should all enjoy this sexy story. My name is Gabby and i approve of this message

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I loved it!

I couldn't stop reading. This story made me play with myself.

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 4 years ago
Love it

I know the characters and plot are somewhat different, but is there a chance we could see Gabby at some point on display in the Esoterica Room, a la Ginny?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This has been such a fun read and it looks like you've set it up for Pt03 too. The pacing was a little fast for my liking but that looks like just how you like to write, which is fine by me! Hoping to read more in the near future!

ShoukoushiShoukoushiover 4 years ago
On a roll

Just as good as the first chapter. And you've set yourself up to have more on the way! Glad to see it. Keep 'em coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Really enjoying the story, keep it up! Will there be a third part?

lazy_readerlazy_readeralmost 3 years ago

I much prefer the (voluntary) sex slave of this part to the punishment in the first part. More of this would be welcome.

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The New Friends story is a revised version of a story I published elsewhere. I have rewritten it to make it Literotica acceptable. If you are interested in reading the original, please email me and will direct you to the free site.