All Comments on 'The Barn Loft'

Ok, so the plot was a tad far fetched, but the story was very good. Also, you've got to write a sequel to this with what these kids get up to next in the barn loft!

Gave it a 5. However, the plot has a critical weakness: "they suggested cooling off in the loft." No sense! Not to anyone that has been in a loft or attic in summertime.

Written by a teenager? Hot little story that ended to soon. Think you real need an editor.

I was into this story as it seemed up until the end that they were being moderately safe. Then last second, no withdrawal or anything. Even if the story included anything about the girls being on birth control I wouldn't have been so jarred out of enjoying youthful escapades.

More. Very hot!

Yeah, we need to know if he "stuck" her; ie, if he bred her.