All Comments on 'The Barrista'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
interesting, but..

Could be an interesting and complex tale, but spoiled by poor spelling and incorrect words.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Nice buildup, five stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good story, thank you

I enjoyed your story. I could see my local coffee house in your words.

18rabbit18rabbitabout 5 years ago
Outstanding

Loved that this wasn't either of their thing. Added you to favorite authors!

Droid121Droid121about 5 years ago
Good work

A really nice start. Fun cage that both characters aren't usually up for any level of kink buy still went with it. Hope to see you continue this. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Amazing!

Very well written and very intriguing! The last lines of dialogue felt very real and really added to the story. I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hilarious

Thank you for that, it was an outstandingly well written story; wonderfully sexy, and the humour was absolutely perfect. Heller's internal ramblings made me laugh out loud the whole way through.

Hot, funny, and believable, one of the best I've read for a while.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot! Really enjoyed the humor, the kink, and the sex. Nice to encounter a male dominant who isn't totally agro. Please keep writing!

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