by Apathalene
Could be an interesting and complex tale, but spoiled by poor spelling and incorrect words.
I enjoyed your story. I could see my local coffee house in your words.
Loved that this wasn't either of their thing. Added you to favorite authors!
A really nice start. Fun cage that both characters aren't usually up for any level of kink buy still went with it. Hope to see you continue this. Keep it up.
Very well written and very intriguing! The last lines of dialogue felt very real and really added to the story. I hope you continue!
Thank you for that, it was an outstandingly well written story; wonderfully sexy, and the humour was absolutely perfect. Heller's internal ramblings made me laugh out loud the whole way through.
Hot, funny, and believable, one of the best I've read for a while.
Very hot! Really enjoyed the humor, the kink, and the sex. Nice to encounter a male dominant who isn't totally agro. Please keep writing!