by HawaiianShirts
Being the team bitch is so erotic---I would love to take his place.
Should be "squeeze shut" not "squeeze shit". Embarrassing typo that I caught shortly after submitting this but don't know how to edit.
There were a few typos. The story did however leave me wondering what it would feel like to have a fist in my Ass an my dick is standing straight up.
Please continue this story. Would like to see how far you can take it and develop the characters. I have done some pretty wild shit, many have no idea how good it is to explore; keep up the good work. And as for the persons with the negative comments, it is easy to be like that if you are anonymous, pay no attention.
Was unexpected, but very good. Got me pretty damn turned on. Please continue. Take the rude comments as constructive criticism.