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All Comments on 'The Battle and the Forest'

by MopeyDick

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Virtually unreadable

Between the plethora of unnecessary micro sentences, tense problems and the apparent misunderstanding on how to use a comma, I just couldn't be bothered to finish the story. Sorry, but nope...

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