All Comments on 'The BBW & The Biker'

This is an excellent story...can't wait to read the other parts. As a BBW myself, it was wonderful to read a story where we're really appreciated for our attributes. Keep up the great work!

I love this story, you're a very good writer. But please have someone edit for you. Grammar and spelling mistakes are very distracting.

I love your story of a Lady like sarah was the center of Attetion and not her friend. The grammer and such was a little distraction but you made the story come alive.

I for one would have pick Sarah over her friend as well.

Keep up the great work.

Lil