All Comments on 'The Beach House'

Awesome . Great read

That was hot

So hot, right amount of detail and did I mention HOT? Good buildup and loved the dynamic between the characters. Felt like I was there and if I was I know Tammy would have let me cum on her face. Instead, it was my own belly. Loved it.

A very hot story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Holy fuck, Wow! Can't seem to get enough ,Wow in! This a great story!

Absolutely amazing and well written! I can only hope there will be another chapter!

Is it Chantal or Chantel?

Choose one and correct the other.

I loved it! Very fucking hot!! Five stars and a favorite point!

Based on the title, this is the 21st story on this site with the same title. Generally, you can judge a book (story) by its cover (title). Luckily, the story was better than what I was expecting based on that title.

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You did, however, change the son's name from Bob to Roger. Luckily (to use that word again), Bob was mentioned only once, so it can just be passed off as a typo.

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The last paragraphs seem to be setting up Chapter 2. On the other hand, this is pretty much a complete story and a continuation is not in the works, which would align with the lack of a chapter number in the title.

Please add more to this story. It is great and keeps you going

Apologies for the the typos. I had not planned a second chapter, and did not advertise one. For me the thrill is the first time that line is crossed. The forbidden act consumated. In this story dad has no idea that Jesse had commiteed incest with her brother. Would telling that story and the story of the honemoon be anti-climactic?

Excellently hot! Needs a sequel. :)

next chapter bring in more family members but no more outsiders. incest is family love. also i think her husband should be kia so she and dad can be together forever.

Thanks for writing this and your writing is good but there was too much eluding to underaged sex. The daughter was a fucking pervert, not in the good way.

Add more please

Loved it!

Awesome please continue. In the next chapter Dad should impregnate his Daughter as a gift for her Husband when he is back

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

Nice, but why do so many who submit comments seem to have a pregnancy fetish? Does this demonstrate some expression of personal inadequacy? On the plus side, this is one of the only stories I've read where the daughter refers to him in the adult form of 'dad' rather than the juvenile 'daddy' . . . .