All Comments on 'The Beautiful Destructions ORIGIN'

It took Ellie long enough to realize that Nichoas isn't her enemy.

Excellent and I so want to read more... Pretty Please!

wonderful writing

I read you said this was the last chapter? I swear I am going to cry...

I admit it still is a great chapter, one of the very best.

I am so sorry that you lost all the previous submissions! They were fantastic! I hope there is some way to recover them.

Whatever happened here on literotica don't let it upset you. You're good enough to be published and even make a living out of this story. I've paid for books not anywhere near as good as your story. I'd happily pay to read Origins in full and it would be a great series. Good luck and make your talent work for you.

This is just beautiful. It's my favorite story here on Lit. I am a little bummed I can't keep rereading them. I seriously hope that you publish this. You deserve the recognition.