All Comments on 'The Beauty of Water'

Cool cette histoire à sa place au concours, vous avez manque de rire son maillot à Zuma Beach ou j'ai mal lu.

Sur cette plage avec les nuages et là pluie, vous auriez pu ensuite faire une soirée de baise hard sur place pour commemorer leur lien avec la mer Atlantic pour un final de vous retiré de sa chatte serrée et enfoncer votre pénis dans sa gorge jusqu’aux couilles afin de remplir son estomac ou bien de la pulveriser de sperme sur tout le corps sexy

Merci beaucoup... Vraiment

Beautiful

The story is so long with a long and boring introduction, the style is fabulous and stirring. Thanks

A nice story. Lacks polish in places where the wrong word made it past the spell check. Pretty tame in the actual sex act descriptions.

This was a different story but really nice. Not too much over the top sex scenes but not too much story either. This has potential to continue

Beautiful story. Incredibly poignant. Nah, that's not a tear... It's dusty in here.

Hope you continue it.

Very nice!

Great love story, I feel there's a part 2 in Mia's future, at least I hope so.

It's nice to see a story in this category with a realistic outcome. Bro ans Sis had their fun and moved on with their lives rather than awkwardly living "happily ever after"

there is lots of room for more story. please continue.

With some differences, you wrote my story.

Great story. Wish he had made love to her in her mermaid outfit.