All Comments on 'The Bedwarmer'

by SilkPantyGirl

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chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
DAMN****

That was hot!!! Thanks for sharing.

Ivy_ilimokuIvy_ilimokualmost 8 years ago
Very good

Artistically done. I love the descriptive a used.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

I easily gave you a five. The Senator had to have a massive tool, of course, so I'd forgive you for that. I like to read about him staying over, or stopping on the return trip, to have the bed warmer and Verina together.

I don't think Romans used bed warmers, but you never specified who these people were.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good premise.

Too bad she's so willing from the git-go. Better if she was acquiescent, but not eager to start with.

Better would have been if -- in the beginning -- she'd made an effort to be nice to him because it was her job to do so. Some conversation in which she'd asked him if he liked what she was doing to him, and what else he wanted her to do to him (or him do to her) would have been good.

More involvement of her breasts would have helped.

The giant cock? Meh.

Four stars.

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