All Comments on 'The Beginning Ch. 01'

I wonder what changes!

A couple of paragraphs do not make a chapter. For the next installment, try to write at least three pages. I can't speak for others, but I personally find short, one page chapters annoying to read and the story looses interest for me rather quickly.

You can make the Chapters longer.. this short is annoying.

Sandwiches really?

Glock doesn’t make a revolver, and caliber .37 is extremely uncommon for any gun. Maybe you meant 357? Or 38?

F.Y.I.... Introduced in 2003, the Glock 37 is chambered in the first caliber developed in conjunction with the Austrian gun manufacturer, . 45 Glock Auto Pistol. Designed as more compact alternative to the legendary . 45 ACP round. Information is the key to power....always remember young grasshopper!

Anywho...I am enjoying how this story has started and luckily I get to binge read more of it now....yay me!

J.D.

A semiautomatic .45 cal pistol with a shorter case than the .45 ACP.