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Click here"Alright, little boy," she snarled, spinning and dropping into a low crouch, clutching the axe in both hands, "no more games!"
She charged at me this time, and it was almost like time stopped still. I remember the very moment she became little more than a blur, rushing at me with a speed that should have been impossible. I remember thinking about how I would probably die right then and there. I remember wondering what sort of funerals they had in the weird place I'd woken up in. I remember seeing the sunlight glint off of the axe as it swung towards my head.
And then, she was there. Moving through the air with the sort of grace and fluidity that befitted a Goddess, Vaishnavi seemed to teleport right in front of me a mere instant before Swati got there. She held her hands straight out in front of her, palms clasped together, lowering and raising them as one, and somehow managing to get behind Swati's grip on the axe. She pushed her hands apart then, breaking Swati's grip and pushing it towards the outside of her body, before bracing herself and grabbing Swati in a full-body hold, stopping her in her tracks. She didn't even slide backwards, but just took the entire force of that charge head-on.
The only exclamation this impressive display of skill and power brought out of her was a soft grunt.
Who the heck- no, what the heck- was this girl?!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years ago50m is not 75% of 116m. It is not even half the height of the tree. Why is this fool even reading this fantasy tale?
Enjoying your story to this point and looking forward to binging the rest.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoApologies to the author who has to put up with such vile and baseless comments from idiots like Mr. (Ms?) Jackshit. A great many of us do appreciate the efforts authors like FSL go to to craft an interesting story - please don't let the cretins like Jackshit put you off from doing more.
Definitely enjoying the tale. Thanks!
kyotie913about 4 years agoOr better yet get Coronavirus. At least Fantasystorylover is willing to share their talent. As far as @Jackspeed2ue goes they only show that they are a know it all BULLY with no life. So do the other readers a favor @Jackspeed2u keep your worthless probably untalented opinion to yourself. You probably haven't written anything worth reading in your complete life. Fantasystorylover I am new to your story but will continue to read your work.
FantasyStoryLoverabout 4 years agoAuthor@Jackspeed2u:
First off, hi. Thanks for reading the story. While I appreciate the time you've taken to expand my knowledge on trees, I'd like to ask you to shove that right where the sun don't shine and fuck right off. But hey, let's break this down, shall we?
1. The Great Tree was tall from the protagonist's point of view and experience. To him, that's the tallest tree he's ever seen. Since you seem incapable of grasping the concept of a POV story, here it is in even simpler words: Are there taller trees in the world? Sure, yeah. Has Chris, our protagonist, ever seen them? No. Conclusion? The Great Tree was the tallest tree he'd ever seen.
2. The width of the tree is meant to be fantastical. It's a whole plot point that goes deeper than you'd imagine, but hey, let's jump to conclusions right at the very beginning, shall we?
3. I really hope you're a botanist, cause if not, you're probably one of those people who are so dissatisfied with their own lives that they need to google up facts to prove others wrong and assert their superiority. Well, superiority asserted. Nobody, literally nobody is asking you to read this story. Don't like it? Don't read it. As stated above, fuck right off.
4. Maybe you ought to use a "spellcheck and grammar check" for that comment, cause man, you really need one!
5. I love how you jump to conclusions (yet again! Notice a theme here, anybody?) without knowing why I took a hiatus from writing or even how serious I am about picking this back up. The next few chapters are almost done and will be up in a few days. But yes, please, do continue to tell me to "fuck off looser". Just a quick question though, if you don't mind: Looser than what, exactly?
