by man_of_sea
Wow! What a fantastic story. Thank you so much.
I’ll share this with my wife, who I love so much.
An easy five stars. Thanks again.
Loved it! The best things in life are right in front of us, if only we choose to see.
They don't come any better than this! She ultimately lived the lesson he taught her.
Beautiful and passion.
The best line was "Life's a lot like an Old Fashion - Complex, a bit strong, but plenty sweet too if you give it some time ".
Spoken from years of experience.
Thank you
Little bit of a stretch on being a romance story and no insight into what the fight with her friend was. Well written though.4.1*
More philosophical than erotic but extremely well done. Flawless in the details though a strange venue for it. But it stands out all the more for that. Thanks for your time and effort. Please write more - you have a talent that deserves to be heard.
This story wasn't the least bit erotic. What a waste at what is an amateur attempt at profoundness.
Thank you for sharing this journey, albeit a short view of it. Not all romance is erotic. Sometimes the love that is shared can be profound and impactful without having a physical component. The natural progression in my mind is that she becomes the ‘life teacher’ for someone later on. And maybe that will lead to a meaningful relationship where she makes the same ‘choice’.