by stickivicki
Thanks for the tour of the West End of Edinburgh, but what had this to do with incest?
brilliant first story , love it, reading this was like watching as you lost your virginity .
awesome story leaving me hard and wanting THE BEST DECISION I MADE was very exciting and wanting more of your erotic stories . do keep them cumming .
Beautiful story. I'd recommend in Chapter 2 you develop a bit more the connection between the two. At best I'd imagine he's an uncle, but hey you could fabricate and realize that he is her dad ... she grew up fatherless ... he returned stateside after a military service tour in England where he met her mother ... his cousin. Still, nice story. I'd love to be your 51 year old man
The title for this group of stories is Incest/Taboo this means that both incest and taboo stories will be found in this group.
As a topic incest has many possibilities as there are many family scenarios.
Taboo could mean anything that is frowned upon by others such as age difference,polygamy etc
This being the case please dont attack an author for placing their work in the correct category just because you dont understand the meaning of that category
Ps. i happened to find the story very erotic.
And that sums up my opinion !
It is in the Incest/Taboo section because of the Taboo of the age difference and where i am going to go with it, so think before you start commenting about things you can't comprehend. Also thank you to everyone else who gave kinder words of encouragement. Xx
This first part of your story, quiet literally (with a few exceptions to some big details) this is my story. I met my fiancé online 1 1/2 years ago, he was 53 and I was 19. Thank you for approaching, describing, and relating to how honest and real this type of relationship can be and is. They are know in the sex lingo world as May/December relationships, older man/young woman or older woman/younger man. I hope I will be able to put into words my experience sometime soon.
Is this a true story? Or just imagination?
I literally was in shock when you even tied in New Years Eve, because that was my first time with my man as well :D no joke.
I'm looking forward to what else you had in mind.
Ignore the haters. This is an excellent beginning. The only thing that would be outrageous would be if you didn't continue the story.
ok i can see this in the first or erotic section but unless she is going to be bringing in a sister or something i dont see the taboo because of age.
A great story, a very good read about two people in love no matter what their age deferents.
I liked that he made love to her a few days before having intercourse showing that he wasn't rushing her into anything and respected her.
Having the story in the wrong section was just a blip that should have been caught by the editor.
It is not true to this category yet, but I am assuming you have a surprise awaiting us? If not it is a wonderfully written story and I look forward to the next chapter(s).
I loved your story!!! i met my husband of almost 25 years when I was 18 and he was 48...it was the most amazing experience when I gave him my virginity on New Years Eve. Here we are 25 years and 5 kids later and still rockin it out...
Loved your story and hope you write more using these 2 characters. 5 stars!!
also, i know i'm not the sharpest tool in the shed but even i knew about the age taboo. i believe Lauren is verbally dressed down by a passerby for her kissing John,
"He's old enough to be your father!"
anyway, thank you, and i look forward to more from you!
I liked the story. It was well written, sexy and with a realistic feel to it. I'll be watching for more.
Your writing and content are unmatched. Such a great tale of seduction and lust. You had this 53 year old hard throughout. Please continue your outstanding work!
Why is this here? Did I miss something? This should be in the May -December romance category.