by Hooked1957
2.5 stars. The story started out well, and could have easily been a great 5 star... except he wanted kids and instead settled for a selfish woman who couldn't give him kids but wouldn't release him to find someone younger.
Oh, and being so much older, when he's a bit older he'll be just as lonely as the bitch ex, since he'll be a widower and too old to find someone new.
Also, Tracy apparently was at least a little self-punished. Lucy was not.
Nice job. Good writing & editing. Sorry about all the dip shits that comment on the story as if it actually happened. If they dislike the characters they take it out on the writer. Keep writing, while I don’t always like the story the writing is top notch. Thanks. 5-😊😊😊😊😊
Ok yeah his first wife was a selfish bitch with messed up priorities on vaginal orgasms vs love and marriage. But she told him before cheating and they got a divorce, as she wasn't happy. Yeah she learned he lesson harshly later after two failed marriages. But honestly she is far from the worse loving wife on here. She is a much better person than Lucy, and I doubt that was Lucy and Barbara's first time. Lucy was a cheating bisexual slut. And why are people ripping on Melinda. So what if she is older than he thought. He fell in love with her. Yes herntwo sons are grown up. Isn't her fault she can't have more kids. Grow up people. Stop projecting your won desires. He loves her and she loves him and he is grateful for their many years together and they complete each other. And he has been welcomed into her family and has five grandchildren that he is so happy about.
Is it just me or do a lot of this author's already old MCs end up with even older women.
3 stars - I am more than happy I lucked out with my first and only wife - more than 1/2 century later we are still joined at the hip - 'til death we do part'.
Acceptance. Quiet relief, satisfaction.
Not joining an exotic threescore with ropes and ropes of seven (about a gallon?) As well multiple screaming orgasms that come in a 'six-pack? Age, slowing down.
The impact of the moral of the story
doesn't resonate until it happens to you.
Then you really feel the consequences, eh?
Oh, puke! Again, another happy ending for poor wimp sissy hubby.
This guy writes like a woman...
There are multiple ways the MC could have had a biological child after he married Melinda. It is something he and she should have discussed. If Melinda trull loved him, she would have been the first to raise 3topic.
Good story, Hooked, thanks for sharing it. I don’t understand why it’s not rated higher, it certainly should be.
Five stars
Dude what is with you and your obsession with much older women? You take the MC, humiliate him repeatedly and then have him marry an old lady even though he wants kids.
Well, that'll teach the size queeens.... maybe. Great story, fun, well written, thank you.