All Comments on 'The Bet'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good Love Story

Nice story. Very upbeat and romantic. Several grammar issues and you changed Amy's name to Ana in one paragraph. Needs editing but a solid story. Needs more chapters of their adventures on Hawaii and then maybe we will see if she is pregnant or not.

LenardSpencerLenardSpenceralmost 5 years ago
Decide if your relationship is to be permanent, or not.

You already have one child, she has two. THAT'S ENOUGH. Financially, if you wish to be a family, raising 3 children and giving them a great upbringing, with University (hopefully), you are already at max. Have a vacsectomy. Then you won't need to worry about condoms that you both dislike. Unless you desire a life of general poverty, no funds for College for the kids and a poor retirement fund, then be a loser and go for it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
bruh

Bruh, this is a site for pornographic literature fantasy, calm down

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