All Comments on 'The Bet'

Good start, but too short

"..Now, I know 8" isn't anything to write home about..."

It is this kind of absolute garbage that steals away all the story's thunder and turns it shit...

Average penis size is 5.5" and about 85% of all males fall into this category according to a quick google. So while 8" is not "MONSTER" big it is long and well above average...

Agree on the 8" comment...sometimes I think people are using a ruler with centimeters instead of inch LOL

Now the story, was a great start, but far too short, and not enough details....hard to get worked up when you dont have anything to work with...

Great start, like where it is going. Even got a chuckle out of me a couple times especially the "Now, I know 8" isn't anything to write home about".

1st anon is correct. 8 inches is porn size, some are even smaller. You do know the average cock is 5 inches, right? Now it's bad enough most stories talk about outsized cocks. But perhaps their characters are meant to be the exception. This statement is stupid as it implies 8 inches is small or average. It was a really good story if not for that, but that threw it in the crapper. Better luck next time.

Jedd

The Mother and Father sex scene was super sexy!

Looking forward to more!

Can't wait for part 2

Loved It! We must have part 2 soon.

good start, cant wait to see the next chapter

Another idiot writer talking about his 8" cock; I stopped reading at that point.

The 8" thing is just silly. Stop it, you're a better writer than that.

Top quality writing. For no ore than what happened between them, this was really good, and quite hot. I have read so many stories it is rare that one gets my blood heated up. I officially declare this story to be 100degreesF!

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This is to one of the anonymous family, the gut with the problem about penis size.

Look little man, you makeit abundantly clear that you have issues with your lack of equipment. Us guys feel badly for you, but the girls just giggled. You seem to have forgotten these are FICTIONAL! MAKE BELIEVE! Not Real life! GET IT ? N fiction most things are dramatically bigger or better. It adds to the story. I mean who wants to read stories about some guy trying to catch squirrels so he can get a piece that feels tight on his .75” member?, And how did we know about you uhhh problem? Simple! You never whine or cry about the fact most of these people live in nice homes and have rides do you? Nope. You don’t say the stories should talk about not making rent money and being threatened with eviction from their shitty little tenament, huh? Not once, Because you don’t have problems with people having money, jivingin nice homes, etc. because you are not self conscious about your checking account! But if they make you think about your tiny little canary raping swizzle stick, and you jump up on your soap box and raise Hell!

Well, for the rest of us, let it go! You don’t see any of us ranking on Popeye because he has big arm muscles, do you?, Because we all understand it is FICTION!!

Just stop

Super hot story please write chapter 2 very soon!!