All Comments on 'The Bet'

This was hard to read pretending I was the person in the story. It may just be me, cuz I'm not into stories in that "person" tense.

Some of the action was a little rushed and it seems the story was rushed the entire way through.

Bravo i absolutley loved the story, you really made me feel like i was there, a very well thought through piece of writting that got me soaking wet!