All Comments on 'The Bet Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Excited for more

woodworkerdomwoodworkerdomover 5 years ago
Nicely done

The preamble was wonderfully detailed. Loved that you didn't go straight into erotic scenes. Very hot middle although I thought the T or D was a little rushed. Can't wait for more. Interested in Michelle too

CroonyCroonyover 5 years ago
Excellent

Really enjoyed this story.

I hope he takes her back to London and they live happily ever after 😁

arrowglassarrowglassover 5 years ago
Waiting for more!

......with "bated breath"...anticipation...please!!!!!!!!

tronstevens18tronstevens18over 5 years ago
Excellent Story!

Wonderful story, excited to see where this goes.

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