All Comments on 'The Bet Concludes'

Fantastic story! Loved the build up. Would love to read more of the brother and sister but I can see where some stories have to end. Thank you for this great story!

Too much too fast, but decent overall. 4*

you could have done another part to it. where the sister was in on it just saying, or at least have her say you lost the bet.

I still like the ending.

Okay that ending though I genuinely loved this story it was sexy and fu. Y and over all just good

Ruined the story by involving the parents

They get caught and the mother just immediately telling them to join was completely unrealistic.

The first 2 parts were amazing but this 3rd story was a bit of a let down

Would've preferred to see what the two of them could've done next without involving their parents

Being part German I knew what "Ich bin eine Muschi" meant, though I think everyone got the joke without Google Translate. I enjoyed this short series; though I am a little confused as how their parents knew everything that was going on with their children. I like your writing style, but also wish this story was a bit more spread out over a few more chapters; focusing more on just the siblings.

It really bugs me that people hide behind the tag “anonymous” when they provide unhelpful criticism. You can critique someone writing and still offer feedback that is more helpful for their future writings.

Not into guys getting ass fucked so that ruined the whole thing

I enjoyed the parts about the sister and brother, and I enjoyed watching the mother and father, but I would have enjoyed the story more overall if the parents had not become actively involved.

Also, I have to point out that I specifically came here looking for the tags "Sister, voyeur" and even at the end of this story the sister and brother have not fucked yet. The first two chapters were exclusively dedicated to the brother and sister yet

even at the end of the story, they never fucked which I am sorely disappointed by.

Completely ruined the story by getting the parents involved before the brother and sister fucked each other first, and then ruining it once again with father and son getting ass fucked ,