All Comments on 'The Big Bet'

This story by Fostery is high quality.

Too many mistakes for this to be as enjoyable as it could have been.

The "Ah-Ha moment that puts family members in a wonderful position.

Pretty good, but proofread or get an editor.

You’re worse than they are, teasing like this. Please don’t make us wait.

Excellent timing and flow. A couple or spelling errors, but who cares.

you're is a contraction for you are, edit it to say 'your'

Don’t stop there, keep going!

Thanks.

please continue

There are sooooooooo many typos I stopped reading after just a few paragraphs. Try getting another hobby, FAST!

what a tease to stop right before it gets good, hope you write a second chapter unlike a lot of authors on here

Very good story, love the character builfing in this!

Could have been worth more stars had you proof read or got an editor. Deserves a second more polished chapter. The innuendo that Eve is about to get a face or mouth full is great but he follow through is weak