All Comments on 'The Big One'

A nice little fuck story, but you did not put this in the right category. This should have been under erotic couplings. I saw no romance here, just a hook up. I didn't see them get close and enjoy each other's company as in going out to dinners and holding hands. Finding out about each other and making a connection. I saw this is your 2nd story. I suppose you are still finding your writing style and place and that is ok. All this is just my opinion (my 2 cents). Keep writing and thanks for your time and imagination.

Can Dominic have sexy body hair? Like a hairy chest? He seems a well-developed, sexy, mature young man!

This is a fine little story- as far as it goes. However, it greatly needs to be enhanced: more build up, more character development, more background information. The ending is also too abrupt, and the love scene is too short. While the classification of this story as a romance (not erotic couplings) is justified, its brevity in so many ways is a flaw.

Nothing romantic about a big dick.

Stupid story, (wish I had one!)

This story is too rushed; a more extensive introduction to the characters and to the background is badly needed. Even the love scene is too rushed, especially for a romance story. This story is good, but could have been great.

Ha. My wife didn't think she was a size queen either until I slipped 8.5 inches into her and she has never looked back!