All Comments on 'The Big Trick'

This was a very well written story that I truly enjoyed reading. It was creepy and scary and gross. I loved every minute of it.

This story truly fits the description of "erotic horror". The thing that makes it so good is that the SOB deserved it. This is very good writing, if you ignore the few typos.

I will say that was different. The horror part was really good. I had to read it all the way through. I had to know what happened. Good luck in the contest. The horror, gore reader should like this.

It hurt just to read it. Excellent vengeance story. Completely unexpected. Good to the last sentence. Good luck in the contest.

I really enjoyed reading it. It shows great imagination.