All Comments on 'The Bigger They Are'

by Omenainen

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ThatNewGuyThatNewGuyabout 1 year ago

What a delightful 750-word tale! The twist was fun, and it was set up nicely (but subtly) earlier in the story when we learned that "Camilla's voice was meek but not shaky." The story tags were great too. All hail Camilla the Cunty. Long may she reign.

Lovecraft_LoreLovecraft_Loreabout 1 year ago

5 stars

That was not what I was expecting at all.

Aurora_DickensonAurora_Dickensonabout 1 year ago

Your stories are always so original, and well told - and this is no exception.

Five stars from me!

MigbirdMigbirdabout 1 year ago

Absolutely perfect tale; so much revealed in a short piece.

yowseryowserabout 1 year ago

Clever, cute, crafty.

Lovely concept and wordplay. 'digestible ceremonial gown', 'offending quim.' Splendid.

holliday1960holliday1960about 1 year ago

This was different. (Which just goes to show the variety on Lit spans a galaxy and takes an eon to discover.) In all fairness, I think the other commenters have one up on me. I need to read some of your other stories so I can get up to speed on your style and voice. Have faith Omen... I think you're just misunderstood by some.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

mwahaHaHaHAHAHAHAHahahaha!

5 stars at least!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

How does one send readers running for the hills in a category featuring werewolves, zombies, orcs, and various other creatures of the night? Why all you have to do is include the phrase "aromatic queef." Buh-bye

JuanSeiszFitzHallJuanSeiszFitzHallabout 1 year ago

A fine bit of fun. I'll have to find a way to use the adjective 'cunty.'

AlinaXAlinaXabout 1 year ago

Alas, poor dragon...

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I write stories I like to read and publish them here in hope someone else might enjoy them too. Comments are much appreciated. English is not my first language, so go easy on my mistakes. I’m also writing under a second penname with the wonderful AwkwardMD. Our collaborat...