by Omenainen
What a delightful 750-word tale! The twist was fun, and it was set up nicely (but subtly) earlier in the story when we learned that "Camilla's voice was meek but not shaky." The story tags were great too. All hail Camilla the Cunty. Long may she reign.
Your stories are always so original, and well told - and this is no exception.
Five stars from me!
Clever, cute, crafty.
Lovely concept and wordplay. 'digestible ceremonial gown', 'offending quim.' Splendid.
This was different. (Which just goes to show the variety on Lit spans a galaxy and takes an eon to discover.) In all fairness, I think the other commenters have one up on me. I need to read some of your other stories so I can get up to speed on your style and voice. Have faith Omen... I think you're just misunderstood by some.
How does one send readers running for the hills in a category featuring werewolves, zombies, orcs, and various other creatures of the night? Why all you have to do is include the phrase "aromatic queef." Buh-bye
A fine bit of fun. I'll have to find a way to use the adjective 'cunty.'