All Comments on 'The Bike Club Pub'

I really enjoyed this, and love reading believable characters. No really crazy plot twists, just slice of life events that serve to expose the characters true nature- good and bad. The only wholly unredeeming character was Todd. Thank you for sharing! I look forward to reading your other submissions.

I don't really understand why Tom didn't marry Lauren. Until he broke it off, there were no signs of her being unfaithful. He says that he was angry that she thought she owned him, but that's probably the most fucking stupid thing he ever said. Sex exists for the purpose bonding a man and women together, and sex that doesn't result in marriage is worse than pointless. Tom is no more virtuous than Todd and is equally as dumb. Jealousy is not only normal and healthy but necessary. He is equally manipulative as Lauren, and really they're perfect for each other. Stupid fucking ending

Great story and character development with hot sex thrown in as the icing on the cake. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

That’s right! Make the Mensan a nut case!

That could be though. I had a member tell me 40 years ago that membership didn’t mean more than doing well on a test. It did t imply and mental, moral, business, or financial sense.