All Comments on 'The Birth of Druids Ch. 01'

I can't wait for more

JasperBlaze

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Really liked the story, please ask for help from an editor, you need it. There are a lot or awesome editors on the site, your story would be better without the typos.

Absolutely loved it...I was so entranced by the story line that I didn't even notice much errors. Wow...can't wait to read more. This is now added to my watch list...anxiously waiting to get giddy when I see that you've posted another chapter.

Nice storyline but it gets a bit jumbled up at about the second page. Get and editor to help if you want to improve on that.

Great story but your editing let you down. Would be happy to edit you next chapter. You can find me in the editors listed.

loved it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Can't wait for more chapters to be added. This really did give a great lead in for the rest of the story. I have a feeling that finally letting their attraction out was just the beginning of the true story.

You just have to continue.

The 'hahas' are very irritating. Apart feom minor editing its good.