All Comments on 'The Birthday Box'

I love cuckold stories! Can't wait to see how this one turns out! Five stars and a favorite point!

would have been better with a ski mask/ balaclava

Please continue this. Great job

That was crazy hot! This isn’t the type of story I usually enjoy, but the author captured such visceral emotions so descriptively it was almost like being there. Plus it’s honestly a great plot with the box serving as such a creative plot device. All the stars. Keep up the great work!

Would like to see the dad and son sharing mom

Part 2???

Loved it.

Please part 2, please.

Wow the sex was so amazingly described. I hope to god there is another part or more

Love this kind of mother son breeding story! Five stars all round and hoping for a part 2

Awesome story Please continue this Breeding series!

Brilliant. Really well written. Thank you

Yup, probably the best i've read on here in quite a while for this genre. Definitely rates/requires at a minimum part 2.

Excellent story!!!

Definitely calling for a sequel

Very good start to a story that could go for several chapters. Mom, dad & son could have a great time if everything works out. I’ll be looking for chapter 2 .....

Five stars .

Next chapter

Loved it,can't wait for more 5 stars

Amazing story, chapter 2 please!

So well written, would love to read more on this

Loved this, hope there is a part 2

Loved the throatfucking session.. would be even hotter without the box when mom is upside down.

1. The writing is in general very good. In particular it's difficult to write about lovemaking here in this forum and make the readers think that it they read something with a new and exciting mode/twist, but so you did.

2. The story telling is not good, although it's quite creative.:

a) There is such a mismatch between the inexperienced virgin in the initial part of the story and this sexually advanced "lover" in the remaining part.

b) The throat jamming scene appears just "out of character" of this guy who adores his mother - and is a kind of rape which is just off-putting to those us who despise force and violence as part of sex.

c) That last part with the terror-stricken mother is simply terrible to read, and made me just cringe. If it has anything to do with literotica, it ought to be in the Horror category -- although you admittedly introduced some intellectually fascinating twists in the finale.

d) It appears quite unbelievable that mother should not become suspicious of the identity of her lover, and son should not recognize his mother, at an earlier stage.

So you wrote very well a story that I really don't know what genre it ought to be put in, and I'm curious of your other writings.

Need chapter 2 ASAP

I couldn’t get past the box. Doesn’t make any sense to me. Stopped reading at the first page. *

Need more my friend

I think there could be, should be, more!

Next chapter please

Yea, chapter 2 ASAP

1. Love the dual meaning with the name "Birthday Box" (caught that one)

2. Who would you say is the physical archetype for the mom character??? Because I was imagining Bryce Dallas Howard with a 55+ inch ass. Like Ryan Conner or, Kaden Kole shaped

Hate it how good stories like this always leave us hanging, and the author probably won't return to continue it. It's the same shit with every other story on this site.

It was 5-star stuff until the end when she turned out not to be into incest and worse, the dad turns out to be a cuck. But I'll just ignore that last part and pretend she knew it was her son and actually loved it. :)