All Comments on 'The Birthday Surprise'

Story ended abruptly, doesn't feel complete

This is weird, it's like his gf has no clue she's has been cheating on her bf. And the fact that she turned his mother into some sex slave and then gifting her to her son in fucked up.

Sadly the ending is a major cliffhanger that can go into any direction.

I hope part 2 is in the works & keep up the good work.

his girlfriend was cheating on him with his mother, which is fucked up in its self, but to bring his mother in to be his sex toy is also fucked up, he should have kicked her ass to the curb. right then.

It is not complete... Next installment is in the works.

If that's all there is, it's incomplete. If there's more, where was the chapter number to warn this wasn't complete.

on the first page... I missed it in the title...

just another gay/lesbo story...DUMPED 1 star

That was BEYOND LAME !