All Comments on 'The Bitch and the Butch'

Great story Grace, very well written and paced. Ending it here, I feel is the best place to do so though more chapters are possible. Fantastic to see you back on here.

I thought this was a well written story but placed in the wrong category. I felt like it could have gone into BDSM, Lesbian, or even Mind Control. It just seem to fit in Fetish. Just my 2 cents.

Good story mild mind control, D/s, lesbian. Yumm.

5/5

J

Loved this, are you considering writing a sequel?

I also wanted to say you’ve fast become one of my favourite writers on here, first your new housemate series and now this!

Thanks everyone for the really kind feedback!

I agree with the anonymous comment - trying to place this story was by far the most difficult of anything I've written!

Thanks HantHermes and obviousagent for the kind words - as for a sequel, never say never!

A wonderful tale, verrrry well told. I liked how you turned the revenge into a better ending for everyone. It was almost romantic, in a butchy kind of way.

This was fantastic! really enjoyed it!

I thought this would be a typical revenge story--where the bad girl gets humiliated and shunned from society. Instead, it's the story of how a butch gets revenge by helping three girls find their true selves. I don't think for a second that Mercedes became gay because of hypnotic suggestion--those audio files merely helped reveal what was already inside her (not surprising for someone who was so vocally homophobic, in the "she doth protest too much" way). That's how choose to interpret the story, at any rate.

Silly and improbable, but fun and sexy. You wouldn't, by any chance, be a fan of Tina Fey's film 'Mean Girls' would you?

M

Thanks for the kind words, everyone! I like your idea, inkyhaunt - maybe there's a little of that in there, who knows?

To the anonymous comment, I actually haven't seen Mean Girls, but everyone tells me I should - I'll try to find the time for it, that's a promise!

Hot and well written. I'd rather had it ending with Esme being the whore femme of Mec and Sophie with Ellie.

Hey Grace hope that someday soon u do a sequel for this when u feel like doing

Bless us with a sequel of this please

Hey Grace hope you are doing well in your working life meanwhile when you come back I have a request to have more of this homophobic straight girls to manly butch conversion stories maybe With Merc going more deep or Esme or even any new character your call but whenever you feel up for it please consider doing one again one like this

I really enjoyed your story Grace! You really bring a unique Butch-femme perspective to a well-written story. I loved every bit of it! You bring out the Butch in girls and we all need more of them! Thank you!

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