All Comments on 'The Bitch Next Door'

so to recap there is no evidence of Joey actually having sex, just a heavily veiled implication, so no swinging

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but on the off chance Joey DID have sex it was without the consent of his wife, so still no swinging

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finally you do have a description of rape via blackmail, which suggests Joey didnt consent to his wife getting fucked, so still no swinging

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minus two stars for the two lying tags

whats up with the fucked up fonts?

You obviously didn't preview this, or else you would have noticed the many characters that weren't translated properly. Those are the black diamonds with the "?" in the middle.

What’s the significance of lines of question marks? They don’t add to the story, just detract from the actual prose.

A damned mess, and not just misplaced ??? all through the story. No LW here, just another cheating bitch and some lame bdsm.

Okay!

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Bitch is a true description.

Smoking hot!!! Yup smoking pile of shit, but you knew that.

Well-written with slow-build, restraint, interesting details, wry humor, and eventual orgiastic relief. A fun, elegant, sensual read with all the koi and peacocks!