All Comments on 'The Bitches in the Basement'

Great story. Keep it up!

Superb! Encore please.

W.O.W.

In this one you really made us feel without a doubt how Cady was sexy and was an absolute object of desire. I litterally wanted to fuck her ass myself, as you somehow acchieved to make me create a clear picture of her in my mind. Well done. Very nice rimming segments also. One of your best stories.

5/5

Wow amazing story might be the best one i have ever read

this was really hot. surprise ending, they really are bitches. this shows that anything can be gained by waving a nice ass in a guy's face...even a new place to live. hooray for blackmail!

Good story. I hope Luke demands more. Hope he desires the girls to perform more ATM (ass to mouth) and excessive ATOGM (ass to other girls' mouth). Gorgeous girls sucking sweet asshole juice from hard cock is very sexy! ~ hours

You're a very skilled writer and a superior observer of the human condition. 5*. I think I've just learned a few things that will help me improve my own writing. You're a much better writer than I am but this story reminds me of elements of my own work. Somehow I managed to miss your work until now.

One word describes this story AWESOME!!!! Thanks for sharing your literary genius with us.

...it is. Luke pretty foolishly allowed himself to get taken advantage of, but hey...at least the show was worth the price of admission. Great story.

Hey guys and dolls, for those that loved this storyline, I have turned it into a full length novel that's about 50K words. I've reworked the two chapters posted on here (The Bitches in the Basement and The Babes on Brentwood) and then added three more chapters, including the hot and dirty confrontation between all the main players. It's now on Amazon and Smashwords for a couple of bucks under the novel title "The Bitches in the Basement" (just google it or visit my site ashleighlake.com for more details). To give you an idea - I've posted about 16K words online and the novel is over 50K words - good value and I promise it to be a verrry satisfying conclusion to the story. :) Thanks so much for the support! XO

They practically raped him. And they have pictures? I seems like he has a couple of options. Your option seems to be pay them off. What about calling the Police option?

Or the most likely option considering they're threatening to ruin his life? Grab the nearest one to him and smash her in the face. Then inform them that if all the pictures aren't in his hands immediately that some broken bones are in their near future. You'd be amazed at how fast the pictures would show up. A "1" for being implausible even for fiction.

I really enjoyed reading this. It was a bit of a let down that they blackmailed him, but the ass play and foursome more than made up for it. I'm looking forward to reading your other stuff! Thanks, David.

This has everything to get a guy interested, hard and then take a cold shower. You're have a wonderfully decadent mind. I envy your man.

Lee

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Okay, that was good. Until the whole blackmail thing. I can't believe this was all a con.