All Comments on 'The Black Dominion Ch. 01'

Interesting but weird! Gustav gets his rocks off, but does not seem to gain any pleasure from it, as though it were something automatically expected from the conference. Anthony is dominated by Abel's mind games, and seems to be responding telepathetically, without any decision by himself.

Hi Spadger, thanks for your comment, and thanks for reading.

This was my first bit of male/male fiction and I wanted to do something different.

I'm sure Gustav got some pleasure out of it all, but who knows, perhaps he is under the control of someone too. It's only gonna get weirder...

:D

Thanks again!

Just discovered this. Wow. If you’re still considering continuing please do.