All Comments on 'The Blackmere Society Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Excellent but

The style, word usage, and language (from what little I could translate of it) is at a pro level. There are minor items, like the title of a book as a full sentence that break the rhythm of your prose but none are severe enough to distract. Nicely done!

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