All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 03'

The continuing entertaining story of the main characters James and Vicki. Boundaries are identified and erotic activities abound. Enjoyable Read! Well Written!

An interesting continuation to the series. This chapter had a bit more meat to it and the sex, little as there was, held our interest. Expecting good things to come! Pete.

How do you like that? A story about the deflowering of a middle-aged fellow where such a story is oh-so-rare to find one. And, a tale told well, with compassion, mystery, suspense, exploration, social commentary and confusion. Well done; very well done! Look forward to more chapters. Thank you.

I have enjoyed your creative and senual stories and look forwad to reading more

James should worry about Nathan finding out before jumping into a relationship with Vicky.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga