All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 08'

I would rather it was in one posting, but at least the chapters are a reasonable length.

The characters are all believable and most are quite well painted.

Waiting for the next episodes...

Any hints about how long the full story is??

Now that was a truly enjoyable "interlude", one where we could forget about the intrigue and bigotry and enjoy a healthy portion of good old fashioned sex for the sake of sex. Well done AutumnWriter, you left me with such a good and contented feeling for once. Pete.

I loved the way this Writer captures the accents of his characters in such an authoritive way as to make the story very believable. Autumn Writer never disappoints. Terrific Write!

Damn fine sex rendezvous you've written! Just enough to be original, suspenseful, and surely hot enough for my taste.

I suspect the "Interlude" is the calm before a storm, and it's well written as always. Nice interplay between characters.

Happy New Year!

anyone with any morals knows it is wrong to screw a married woman. Trying to sell that an ex priest feels no guilt because a woman says the husband won't mind is stepping over the line of reality/fantasy. No matter how good the writing the story line has to be realistic or it will fail to draw the reader into the play that lays before them. #1 TK