All Comments on 'The Blank Cheque'

This is a gorgeous story, I love the direct way it is written as well as the humour within it. Very naughty too.

Please keep on writing - your stories are great!

Thanks for the comments, I love reading them. There is a simple reason my stories are generally written in a direct, first person, style and that is because they are recreations of actual events. Might be the odd exaggeration or fantasy embellishment, but essentially true. Unless of course I introduce the tale as all fiction.

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… and that’s a wonderful way to write, because as one of your readers I get to know these private things about you a little bit, which makes reading your stories exciting because I feel I know these cute things about the real you, like having a special friend to share secrets with! Thank you for sharing, your stories are yummy and I love reading them. kx

The idea of the box completely enclosing your head is ingenious, meaning that you exist in complete and silent darkness while everybody else sees you as a vulnerable anonymous girl, at their mercy. The piercings are scary and humiliating, and so final. If you write some more I think you would find yourself with a growing set of fans! Very well done so far.

Wow, what a sexy story and you make it seem SO real! Really enjoyed it. I’ve fantasized about some of these things but your writing style makes it seem like you’ve actually done it!

If you don’t write more soon you might get a negative review on tripadvisor! (This is meant affectionately.)