All Comments on 'The Bleakest of Seasons Pt. 02'

Please please please continue this story it's incredibly written

Simply amazing. The details and the passion. It's perfect

Loved this one. I hope one day the insperation for part three reaches the author

Thank you for sharing your talent and skill as a writer.

Part three please

Don't stop!!! I'm completely addicted. I'm also convinced that you must have been a woman in another life, as your female character is absolutely spot on. I am also angry with you as I have not gone to bed before 1:30 AM for the past two days due to this story. Don't worry, I forgive you.

I love this series. I have for a long time and always come back to it. But it made me wonder...when did she get her car back from the restaurant?

This was great, I am dying for a part three!!!

I'm anxiously waiting for part three!!!!!

I am hooked. Can relate to so much in this story. I couldn't put it down. Can't wait for the next chapter!

:) :)

Anxiously awaiting part 3. I am in love with these two.

I am looking forward to part 3!!!!!

Such a great read ! Is there a part 3 ?? Would love to read it

This is absolutely FANTASTIC!

Im loving every bit of it. The format took a while to get used to, but once I did... Wow. Just wow!

I can't wait for the next installment. Hurry, please!

This is amazing!! I've enjoyed this one from the start and I'm excited for part 3! Makes a change that it's not just a handsome man who sweeps a woman off her feet, she is the one that keeps pushing him.

So excited for part 3!!

Reading this, longing for this. Their vulnerabilities, guarded needs being shared as trust grew has me yearning for someone in my life. I have been alone so long, reluctant to be rejected again after exposing too much of who I am. Your writing has touched my heart, removed the barriers I hide behind and I now feel so empty and lonely and I Want. Please continue writing. You have brought me a gift: I feel, I desire, I am thinking perhaps I could take a chance again. I thank you for sharing your stories.

You are a truly talented artist (and if you do the things in your stories, you're talented at more than one thing). I never leave comments here, but I felt like an exception in your case was necessary because of the amazing quality of your work. I've read best selling novels that were not developed as well as these two stories. I can't wait to read more. I do wonder if you have any work not on literotica. You write so well that I feel like I could read your explanation on the differences between grasshoppers and locusts with fervor. Encor, s'il vous plait!

http://offbeatr.com/project/the-bleakest-of-seasons-a-bdsm-novel-67138518966

guys if you really want this book to be finished, just like I do, please go to that link And vote. it only needs 90 and as of right now we have 78 so please vote!

http://offbeatr.com/project/the-bleakest-of-seasons-a-bdsm-novel-67138518966

make sure there is no space between "season" and "s"

Well written, fleshed out characters, it felt like real people....No billionaire bullcrap. Bless your twisted lol heart and mind. Keep writing!!

OMG im in love! The characters are amazing and well written. Thanks for writing this!!!! Please keep writing more for these characters I want to read more!!! 😊

I couldn't stop reading. Left me chills as I felt such a strong connection with the characters. Great great writing.

I saw that this was written in 2012. Was there a part 3? Did she go to that party? What did her dress look like? I have so many questions!!!

Ok, soooooo I'm hooked. Waiting very impatiently for chapter 3!

There's going to be a part 3? I was just curious from the other comments. I know this was written awhile ago. Other than the odd use of 'you' referring to the main character and tense this is one of my favourite stories. It is very hot. Although I wonder if the same story would be equally hot with a young hot guy and an unattractive woman as Scott :/ Oh well, double standards I guess. Scott still seemed pretty hot

please PLEASEmake a part 3!! I love this so so much , brilliant writing

I know this is from 2012 but I'm really, really hoping you write more!

I read this story a few years ago and for a while I checked constantly to see if part 3 had been posted or not. Even now I still check for it every now and again. I'm deeply saddened that there's still no part 3 but I understand if the writer didn't want to continue. I hope that one day they will decide to release part 3 because this is one of the reasons my dom and I are as close as we are now.

So I want to say this to you Sir deeply_twisted, thank you for making me feel more comfortable with myself as a sub and thank you for helping me realize what I really wanted through your stories. You're the best.

We need to learn about the dress and the S Club.

Beautifully written and well worth the time to read

I read this story, as well as your Tuesday story, every once in a while. I must say, you are a wonderful writer - I do hope you are doing something with your talent, and maybe someday you'll see fit to return to your fledgling stories that we love so much.

waiting patiently for you to continue. need. want.

Please Sir Deeply_Twisted can you find the time to write part three? It doesn't need it, but we all would love to know that they end up together and we REALLY want to know what that dress looks like!! Keep writing!

So, I'm 5 years late to the party since you published this in 2012 but at least I got here! Please write more!! Great great great! Looking for this myself ;)

6 years late! Please write more!!

I don't know when I discovered this series, but it's been years, and I circled back this past week to read what I still consider one of the best on this site. It's so wrong, but I think my favorite part of this entire series is when Scott slaps and backhands her and stuffs her in the trunk. Second favorite moment is when he takes her to "hell". I wish that scene had gone on a little longer, but I appreciated the realism of his suddenly snapping out of the mood. The realism on this story is what makes it better for me than most of the fantasy stories. It is believable, and makes Scott ever more endearing. I totally love this series, and implore you to write more. Specifically more of the hard core one on one punishment. Please!!!

This story has me in an absolute stupor. I really wish this series would continue. I’ve read so many stories on literotica, this is absolutely my favorite so far.

I read this a long time ago and loved it, but was too cautious back then to make an account and then couldn't find it again when I came back to the site. I found it last night and devoured it. Just as mind blowing as it was the first time. Thank you.

Please write again :(

That is an incredibly erotic story! Please don’t stop writing. Your plots, the build-up of dramatic tension, outstanding!

First of all, this is a fucking fantastic story and writing. One of the best, on a site, with a half a million stories! Kay? So I loved it. I hope the writer is alive and well. DT, you hear me, get back here and finish the damn story!!! I just have to point out a tiny pet-peeve problem that had me yelling out loud (not in a good way). If you get a beating like she got (where her leg welts and bruises are graphically described) there is no way in hell she is wearing SHORTS the very next day. Or if she did, she would be hella self-concsious about it. There's a line in Story of O where she proudly displays her abused body, but this character is not there yet, emotionally.