All Comments on 'The Bleakest of Seasons Pt. 02'

First of all, this is a fucking fantastic story and writing. One of the best, on a site, with a half a million stories! Kay? So I loved it. I hope the writer is alive and well. DT, you hear me, get back here and finish the damn story!!! I just have to point out a tiny pet-peeve problem that had me yelling out loud (not in a good way). If you get a beating like she got (where her leg welts and bruises are graphically described) there is no way in hell she is wearing SHORTS the very next day. Or if she did, she would be hella self-concsious about it. There's a line in Story of O where she proudly displays her abused body, but this character is not there yet, emotionally.

That is an incredibly erotic story! Please don’t stop writing. Your plots, the build-up of dramatic tension, outstanding!

Please write again :(

I read this a long time ago and loved it, but was too cautious back then to make an account and then couldn't find it again when I came back to the site. I found it last night and devoured it. Just as mind blowing as it was the first time. Thank you.

This story has me in an absolute stupor. I really wish this series would continue. I’ve read so many stories on literotica, this is absolutely my favorite so far.

I don't know when I discovered this series, but it's been years, and I circled back this past week to read what I still consider one of the best on this site. It's so wrong, but I think my favorite part of this entire series is when Scott slaps and backhands her and stuffs her in the trunk. Second favorite moment is when he takes her to "hell". I wish that scene had gone on a little longer, but I appreciated the realism of his suddenly snapping out of the mood. The realism on this story is what makes it better for me than most of the fantasy stories. It is believable, and makes Scott ever more endearing. I totally love this series, and implore you to write more. Specifically more of the hard core one on one punishment. Please!!!

6 years late! Please write more!!

So, I'm 5 years late to the party since you published this in 2012 but at least I got here! Please write more!! Great great great! Looking for this myself ;)

Please Sir Deeply_Twisted can you find the time to write part three? It doesn't need it, but we all would love to know that they end up together and we REALLY want to know what that dress looks like!! Keep writing!

waiting patiently for you to continue. need. want.

I read this story, as well as your Tuesday story, every once in a while. I must say, you are a wonderful writer - I do hope you are doing something with your talent, and maybe someday you'll see fit to return to your fledgling stories that we love so much.

We need to learn about the dress and the S Club.

Beautifully written and well worth the time to read

I read this story a few years ago and for a while I checked constantly to see if part 3 had been posted or not. Even now I still check for it every now and again. I'm deeply saddened that there's still no part 3 but I understand if the writer didn't want to continue. I hope that one day they will decide to release part 3 because this is one of the reasons my dom and I are as close as we are now.

So I want to say this to you Sir deeply_twisted, thank you for making me feel more comfortable with myself as a sub and thank you for helping me realize what I really wanted through your stories. You're the best.

I know this is from 2012 but I'm really, really hoping you write more!

please PLEASEmake a part 3!! I love this so so much , brilliant writing

There's going to be a part 3? I was just curious from the other comments. I know this was written awhile ago. Other than the odd use of 'you' referring to the main character and tense this is one of my favourite stories. It is very hot. Although I wonder if the same story would be equally hot with a young hot guy and an unattractive woman as Scott :/ Oh well, double standards I guess. Scott still seemed pretty hot

Ok, soooooo I'm hooked. Waiting very impatiently for chapter 3!

I saw that this was written in 2012. Was there a part 3? Did she go to that party? What did her dress look like? I have so many questions!!!

I couldn't stop reading. Left me chills as I felt such a strong connection with the characters. Great great writing.

OMG im in love! The characters are amazing and well written. Thanks for writing this!!!! Please keep writing more for these characters I want to read more!!! 😊

Well written, fleshed out characters, it felt like real people....No billionaire bullcrap. Bless your twisted lol heart and mind. Keep writing!!

make sure there is no space between "season" and "s"

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guys if you really want this book to be finished, just like I do, please go to that link And vote. it only needs 90 and as of right now we have 78 so please vote!

You are a truly talented artist (and if you do the things in your stories, you're talented at more than one thing). I never leave comments here, but I felt like an exception in your case was necessary because of the amazing quality of your work. I've read best selling novels that were not developed as well as these two stories. I can't wait to read more. I do wonder if you have any work not on literotica. You write so well that I feel like I could read your explanation on the differences between grasshoppers and locusts with fervor. Encor, s'il vous plait!

Reading this, longing for this. Their vulnerabilities, guarded needs being shared as trust grew has me yearning for someone in my life. I have been alone so long, reluctant to be rejected again after exposing too much of who I am. Your writing has touched my heart, removed the barriers I hide behind and I now feel so empty and lonely and I Want. Please continue writing. You have brought me a gift: I feel, I desire, I am thinking perhaps I could take a chance again. I thank you for sharing your stories.

This is amazing!! I've enjoyed this one from the start and I'm excited for part 3! Makes a change that it's not just a handsome man who sweeps a woman off her feet, she is the one that keeps pushing him.

So excited for part 3!!

This is absolutely FANTASTIC!

Im loving every bit of it. The format took a while to get used to, but once I did... Wow. Just wow!

I can't wait for the next installment. Hurry, please!

Such a great read ! Is there a part 3 ?? Would love to read it

I am looking forward to part 3!!!!!

Anxiously awaiting part 3. I am in love with these two.

:) :)

I am hooked. Can relate to so much in this story. I couldn't put it down. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm anxiously waiting for part three!!!!!

This was great, I am dying for a part three!!!

I love this series. I have for a long time and always come back to it. But it made me wonder...when did she get her car back from the restaurant?

Don't stop!!! I'm completely addicted. I'm also convinced that you must have been a woman in another life, as your female character is absolutely spot on. I am also angry with you as I have not gone to bed before 1:30 AM for the past two days due to this story. Don't worry, I forgive you.

Part three please

Thank you for sharing your talent and skill as a writer.

Loved this one. I hope one day the insperation for part three reaches the author

Simply amazing. The details and the passion. It's perfect

Please please please continue this story it's incredibly written

More more more!!! Pretty please, fell in love with this story.

Absence of water falling from the sky be damned. The more serious drought is right here, with the continuing lack of something new from Lit's most intriguing author. I hope your muse strikes again soon; I'm going nuts!

Really enjoyed this! Is there a part 3 (she asked hopefully?)

Thank you, this story was lovely. Idealized without being completely unrealistic. I hope to read more from you, truly well written. Still searching for my Scott :)

"'Yes. It was good. The... the director played a switcheroo and set up a sad ending... but it ended up being a ... happy... one.' He trails off slowly. Then he stops and puts his hands to his face for a moment."

I see what you did there. :P

So great, this. Thanks for giving us some more darkness in this one. Not enough of that done well to go around, IMHO. 5 stars

What a great story

I had an Addie,, long ago.

I am still looking for another

This story brought back such wonderful memories

thank you

I loved reading this. I was intrigued by the beginning where Addie has "met" someone online...you see I did exactly that three years ago. He didn't turn out to be my "Scott" but did make me question my life enough to change it. I had the same thoughts of feeling like it had been a while since anyone cared.

This story struck so many chords with me I can't begin to describe it. I sincerely hope to read a new chapter at some point and find out what happens next.

I echo the thoughts of others that I hope there is more to both this series and your "Tuesday" series either here or in some other media form. Your build of your characters and the situations you create are wonderful. I would very much enjoy more time with all your characters. I certainly hope I get to have that.

I am completely in love with this story and the character's. Your writing is absolutely mesmerizing! I want to be Addie and need to find my Scott. PLEASE, let there be a book # 3! I am dieing to find out how she enjoys the club.and Scott's friends.

Your story is literally my fix just for something good too read. I love that you dont make it all about sex and you actually develop your characters and everything. Im absolutely falling in love with them. :)

Thank you so much for your beautiful writing. It is my hope that everyone finds a relationship like Scott and Addies!

A riveting read that makes me long to learn more and share more with you and your characters. It reads as so familiar to me yet surprises me as well. I hope one day this story flows back into your consciousness and you pen another section. Would love to explore the club, the more darkness of Scott and this burgeoning daddy daughter thing (perhaps!). Thanks again for the enjoyable read.

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!

Oh my god you are a fantastic writer!! Everything is...amazing doesn't even begin to cover it. From the character development to the after care and attention to the little nuances and verbal pairings...oh my god!

Sooooo gooood! Please, please, please write more of this story!

In all my years reading stories at literotica, this is the best one I've ever read. I really really. REALLY hope you will still write more of this. I'm intrigued to read about Addie's fitting, her subsequent trip to Club S, and to see what Scott's friends think of her.

Thank you for writing this, I could hardly put it down as I read it on my kindle.

(Also, I finally joined the site so my comment wouldn't be anonymous)

My favorite! MORE MORE MORE!

MORE, MORE, MORE!

I hope that you have not given up writing this story though I noticed you have done another one since and it has been awhile since you began it. I'm intrigued to see what Addie's dress looks like, how she reacts to club S, if she'll share her past hurt and learn to trust again. Equally I'm curious to see Scott in action at the club and learn more about his own inner demons. How deeply twisted will the two become around one another's hearts?

I loved part 1 and 2! Please, please, PLEASE make another one!

I loved part 1and 2 now if I could find a man like that!!!! Please more please !!!!!!!!!

I've not read something that's gotten me so hot before. I love the chemistry and development please carry on. Eagerly Yours, Leigh xx

All previous comments cover my sentiments, but I still wanted to show some support:) The development of both the characters and story is amazing. Never rushed and never boring.

This story is fucking fantastic.

I love this story ! I hope to see more of Addie and Scott!

MORE!!!! Whens the next installment?

Is the next installment still... coming?

Finally got chance to read part 2 and now I have just one comment to make - DT. Just.Finish!

An incredible read, too easy to lose yourself in the story. I, personally, would love to see more of any side of Scott

I wrote a review on this story last year, and I was in the mood for something on the extreme side, so I came back to this story. The extreme side of Scott, I want him back! I hope that his dark side is not something he wants to always keep hidden. More more more! I look forward to seeing your next installment!

I'm loving this story! BDSM has always interested me but I I don't have the balls to actually get involved. Keep it coming!!

that was just wonderful. words cant describe.im not into hardcore bdsm but i really enjoyed this story- genuine, realistic, erotic and more. thankyou. im guna have to register in order to be able favourite this!

I love how real this is. Not the fancy super cute guys and girls in some stories

And the humorous scenes (Scott banging his head on the table while chasing Addie) just makes it more real and fun to read.

I adore that "orange juice" is one of the tags for this story... ;-) -) ;-)

How exciting!!! The story lives... my favorite of all time. ;-) ;-) ;-) Thank you, for your gifts.

:)

It's really great seeing you back DT.

Can't wait to see what you have for us :)

let me be among the first to welcome you back. I'm sure you can see you've been missed. I'd given up hope a long time ago, and was preparing to buy a kindle. Hope you're well, happy and feeling up to the expectations of your fans. Take care...best wishes -- and thanks for not deserting us. I'm sending good thoughts to your muse.

... yes, there is more of this story coming. I'm sorry it's taken as long is it has. It's been a tumultuous year, and the words don't always flow like they should. I'm sure you guys understand.

I'd like to thank everyone that stopped by to comment on the story. You do give me energy to write more and I appreciate it.

Thanks everyone.

DT

Dear Deeply_Twisted,

Do you plan to write more about Addie and Scott, because I crave to know more about their story. This can't be the end...I wish I could read something asap.

Looking for more always,

Slowly Submissive

You nail the mind chatter of someone—Addie, of course—going through an intense experience over a few days—the ebb and flow of her thoughts and feelings, her worries, wonders, agonies and ecstasies. You created marvelous characters with Addie and Scott, including Addie's ability to see the physical Scott, superficially unattractive, but wholly captivating.

Thank you for a extraordinary story of two people connecting and learning and living fully with each other. What a pleasure reading your story.

Wow, just wow

Please write more!!

I absolutely love this one as well as the first one. I hope you write a lot more. I'll be anxiously waiting for the next part.

Great story , write more please!!

this has to be the best fucking thing i have ever read.. its fucking 4:10 in the morning...

please don't stop

Love this story. I was really looking forward to reading more but given the date of your last chapter I'm wondering if there's actually anymore to come. I so hope there is..but..if not could you please advise us of that because it can get really frustrating when your page is checked everyday hoping there maybe another just to find there isn't. Please keep going as it's such a great story.

I loved everything about this story! Please continue it!

Loved everything you've written so far, though looking at the dates you wrote them I'm nervous to think there may not be anymore coming...I check here often and reread and I'll be crushed to not read more from you! Please don't stop writing- your stories serve to fulfill a part of me I can't quench or satisfy.

Thank you.

Great Story.

I liked this story very much. Thank you for writing it. I can't wait for the new chapter.

I wish you will continue it. Every day that I have to wait for continuing is to much.

I really liked it. Some of the parts of the story were to much for my taste but I have enjoyed it very much.

Keep on doing what you do please. You are so good at this. I appreciated your work here. Do us all a favour and do not stop keep on writing.

Loved it! Definately need to find out about the club though.

More, please!!!!

I love this 2 parter! Wish you would give us more! I can't wait to see her introduced at the "club". This is by far my favorite story I've read on here!

After reading both parts one and two, I wanted to congratulate the author for crafting a realistic depiction of both sexual obsession and the kink community. I like that Scott is not portrayed as a perfect physical specimen, but is instead imbued with those all to human defects that everyone faces as we age. Further, Addie's character is conflicted between her desires, fears, and the aftermath of this encounter that mirrors human experience. I was especially touched by those vignettes of Scott's aftercare for Addie.

I'm reminded of such films as Last Tango in Paris, In The Realm of The Senses, and Bad Timing. There's next to no exposition, almost all running in scene in straight story time. Addie's character arc holds true to life, in her emotional transformation from the experience. The story relies on her shifting psychological states for plot development, rather than hackneyed external conflict or excessive description that evokes irrelevant imagery.

Really, very nice execution.

My only quibble is the use of second person. That's a writer's choice. As a reader, I found it somewhat difficult to take. But I also recognize that the work probably wouldn't have succeeded in third person and that first person is vastly overused and very difficult to pull off well. Interesting choice.

I sincerely hope the author continues on with additional chapters to this story. I'll read and enjoy them, with gluttonous abandon. Thank you so much for the read. It made my day.

Wow please kepp going! Great story line and great writing! Love it !

Thank you

Well, I was going to say wow....seems like so many have beat me to that rather handy praise. :) Please sir...more. We need more.

An absolute masterpiece so far. Can't wait for part 3 :-D

I can't even form words for this comment. I'm so completely taken with this story, wrapped up in it, and dripping wet from it. Christ almighty I need more of this.