All Comments on 'The Blind Girl in the Rain Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So the guy is a slut who fucks every woman in the office and we're supposed to want him to hook up with the beautiful blind girl? Meh

dgfergiedgfergieabout 3 years ago

Fate brings them together again or maybe that's the way our author wrote it! Nice writing and flows well. Kudos to the editor as well.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

So much potential but why isn’t HR all over this guy, LOL, he’s a harassment suit waiting to happen. Still, 5 stars!

sexydad50sexydad50about 6 years ago
Great start

For a story! I hope that this is a real story with believable characters.

nadaliwnadaliwover 6 years ago
5*

Great beginning, I can't wait to read how he will try to acquire her attention.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 6 years ago
Far too short

I'm not into one page chapter stories ⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Looks promising

As long as you keep it in the true spirit of the romance section and don't skip categories I can see this one being a truly remarkable one. Guess there is always someone who can turn even a horndog around with just a smile :)

5 for now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great start

Love this story so far and I am looking forward to seeing how you shape it. Thank you for writing

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