All Comments on 'The Blizzard'

Another blizzard/storm story. Yaaaawwwwn.

Well written and a enjoyable read. The ending seemed rushed but I didn't by him not having Oral with his wife. Seemed strange. I guess he couldn't have found a better teacher.

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Cheers

Sweet, kind, and good for the soul.

Fairly well done. A little proofreading would catch he and her misuse. And ecstacy has no x in it. Spell check is easy, though it leaves you with properly spelled wrong words without good proofreading. Not a terribly original idea but reasonably good. Maybe developed into a move in situation a little rapidly.

How does a diesel generator run on propane?

In reference to the idiot anonymous below who asked about about running a diesel generator on propane, you get a conversion package and connect up the propane!

Diesel to propane

Conversion kit???

Gas to propane yes!!

He was in the navy and never had a blowjob?????

I loves me a good Romantic Snowstorm story! Exspecially with little Blondes!

One lil thing, tho...Th'Booty Muscle Group is Glutes, not Gluts. Just sayin'.

J R Quilcon

This has real legs - give us chapter 2!

Yes! I have to get a young blonde Airline Stewardess to replace my 60 year old wife, lol.

The story line is great, though a little hard to accept that they would move in together after less than a day. They are adults. And your readers would benefit from your use of a Grammar checker and a Spelling checker. The grammar checker would help the a lot of the him/her, he/she, his/hers errors, and sentence structure. That said, I enjoyed your story. Keep at it. Will Harty

Too short, too hastened, written carelessly - no fun.