by Stefan_J
Man would i love to be the reciver of that blow job.... I then would return the favor and suck your clit till you sent your sweet juice back to me MMMMmmmmm GULP
sucking a hard cock. The feeling of control and power is wonderfully exciting and stimulating. The girls of your story are of course totally made up, but.... there are days when I feel I would like to just stop some guy and ask him if he would like his dick sucked. So your story hit a note with me.
I loved the story and I hope you put more of this kind of work out. I was a fan of you before but I certainly am now. Anbody who can drag a blow job out that long without it even begining to bore people has a talent that I wish I could claim! Keep it up!
Well-written and well-paced, this story is a real gem. Kudos!
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your published work.
I love your description and obvious passion in your writing.....give us more!!!
Can't wait for the next part so please don't keep us waiting too long
Totally enjoyed that story! I'm sure I speak for everyone else in that we can't wait to hear about Rick's day with these two lusty hotties.
That's the funniest porn short i think I've ever read...Laughing too hard to jerk off! I thank you truly...and schedule those 2 young ladies for a week up at my place please
Absolutely one of the 3 best stories that I have ever read, you really need to write more about Meg and Tash: The Blowjob girls again and again.
I am really looking forward to this becoming a series, you have a lot of talent.
It's been 2 months are you going to continue with this story anytime soon?
Sorry i'm just in the mood for a fresh BJ story. ;)
definitely my favorite story on the site. hot, original, and great detail. keep up the great work.
best ive read so far please write the next chapter and make it long
I doubt you're around anymore, but if you are, I am sure that everyone would love to read a new story by you about the BJ girls.
i hope there will be a second to this story i really would lke to know what other tortures the girl will inflict on that poor guy.
...beginning with the bit about hot young 20yos liking to suck cock! (Yeah, I'm a grumpy old cynic.) Good writing though, it painted some vivid pictures.
Stefan's stories are always very well written, but this is a minor effort. Some of his humor is there. But it has a nasty aura and no personality beyond dirty sex.
I agree with the previous comment posted. It was well written in your style. but yet there was none of the relationship building, character development that your other stories posses.
It was still enjoyable nevertheless
This is GREAT SEX with a huge dollop of carefree HUMOR and FINE WRITING. I mean, shopping at the Mall for fresh cock!?!? Sex as sales goods? Holy sweet cunt on the prowl! More adventures, please. This is fun!
This just had something to it. Shame it's that short, would have liked to see continuation.
Problem is; even if I had, I don't think they'd have gotten past my defenses. I don't let my lower brain control me; too damn many problems.
Thanks;
DKP
Liked it. Well done. Different twist from the usual porn. Keep writing about Meg and Tash please. Thank you.