All Comments on 'The Blue Envelope'

Sounds pretty much like what our boys are fighting against in Afganistan.

Hope you have a chapter 2

Good details on the mechanics of whipping prisoners en masse in some anonymous government agency. But your description was mechanical. How about the description of each stroke and how it affected you? Were you humiliated at the fact that the audience and the guards were getting aroused seeing you squirm naked in front of them?

You could describe the smile on the guard's face when he hit you in the cunt with the cane or the bulge in his pants as his efforts were amply rewarded with your screams of uncontrollable pain?

Isn't the idea that inflicting pain brings pleasure? The pleasure the guard recieves from your total humiliation would be the interesting part. There might be a scene before the whipping even begins where the guards offer to go easy on you if you want to perform some sexual favor for them...lol! Maybe you could kneel and give him a lingering blow job while he looks down at you smiling. Your pain...his pleasure! Anyway, that's what I would do if I was a guard looking you over carefully, getting a bit aroused, just before I was going to send you screaming into the abyss...I'd give you a chance to beg. **malapulga@yahoo.com

Absoulutely loved it, only thing that could of made it better is if the shoved something her ass. Or she orgasmed and no one else did and it was humilating and downgrading

Hot and kinky, a very dystopian feeling future.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.