All Comments on 'The Boat'

nice. she must have been really horny. hope there is a descriptive chapter 2.

I am hoping that this is just the first chapter .

Up to your usual excellent standard .

Oh, there's definitely more coming. The plot line follows his usual " true gentleman rescues unhappy but lovely lady from a sad situation without trying to seduce her"......but we all know he will - or she'll seduce him (which doesn't take much effort).

Please continue.

NWR

I sail, so I'm always interested in "boating" stories [even thouse about power boats], especially when they include "wet dreams." Your story was well written, and pleasant to read, but pure fantasy. However, I don't believe that "ideling" at 40 knots is really possible.

However, you have to proofread more carefully. SpellCheck is not sufficient, as there are too many words which have different meanings when spelled differently. "To" rather than "too"

If I remember correctly, I said throttled back to 40 as in mph.

As for editing, I do the best I can but since my last Lit. editor died, I haven't looked for another. If and when I decide to publish this story or any other, then I will worry about editing it perfectly.

Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you liked the story

I have to admit that I fell in love for the heroine. This author turns out excellent reads.

Story ended too soon, hope you write the rest of the story, I would but can not type with one hand.

It is a great start on a new story. Please continue.

M/61/Louisiana

Well crafted story filled with hope andi promises. Thank you.

I agree with the others, I really connected with the characters. I hope you decide to do more with them.

A 50 horse motor powers a boat to 45 mph? Well worth $6 grand but I don't believe it is possible. Enjoyed the story otherwise which gave me a nubby. Thanks!

nice start, am looking forward to the island bit

I know nothing about boats. Even without any actual sex, this was still very erotic. It had the desired "effect" on me. This is not the section I usually spend time in, But it was nice to read something with characters closer to my age. I'm just not saying which one was closer to my age. :) Continue the story please.

You get my vote also for several more chapters, TR. I've been widowed by cancer twice and am with my third wife and some years older than Helen's previous husband would have been. So, you know that my experience supports the claim for much more of this story! My mail is in your Contact box.

would like to know how this would continue! what will happen on the island's beach? are those two going to stay together? what will happen to them in the future?

You have broken my heart with a georgeous mature woman and a stylish boat all in one story, and all so well told with just a touch of anticipation as to what mat come next in the characters lives.

I'm 10 yrs older than he was and lost my wife last year. Such a bitter sweet story. I love the water but cannot afford a large hole in it. Do have a couple of small boats on a small home owners only lake though. Most of the others are stodgy and don't even fish. But I love it enough to make up for their shortcomings. I am short on cummings too, darn it. Thanks a lot, it made my day. Lynn

Very nice! A 5-rating for certain!

Nice little story.Thanks

A very nice story indeed... I could almost see myself in the boat with that beagiful redhead. Great job.

What a delightful surprise of a story! I'd love to read more chapters, but it's great as is as well. I really enjoy your story-telling. The characters seem very real to me. Well done!

Well written.........but could have used a finish with a flourish!!!

Lucky guy!

WOW! AWESOME STORY. A terrific story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this amazing story and plot. I hope you choose to continue with additional chapters.