All Comments on 'The Boat'

Very nice warm up. I like that you have proofed your work before you publish and there are very few word gaffs. I followed you hoping to learn how this couple progress in her license to explore the world together.

Really? 1*

If Odiouser liked it I knew it would be trash, and it was. I agree with azranger, no woman would write like this unless she was mentally impaired. 2 stories, 5 followers, that ought to tell you something.

The idiots do not die out as some authors prove to us again and again with their stories!

Garbage, husband left making plans to BTB

Wft is this nightmare? Who has this as a fantasy? Hopefully the "writer" will experience this "Story" and end up with STDs and if the "writer" is married then let's hope the skank gets divorced real soon. No man should have to live with or be with a bitch in heat like this character.

Next, we get to have her get back to Ed and tell him all about it

Figures Odiouser would approve this garbage. 1*

Husband allows wife to ride on boat, while he drives to marina. WHY

Who are these people? There is very little story. Just one fuck scene after another and hubby will get to pick up his cum slut wife. Stupid rating 1

Press the button labeled 'Belief Suspension' now. A husband and wife have sex in water chest deep on him and 75 yards away from shore. It just so happens that a boat with three strange men (and one woman it seems) comes within 20 feet of them...and she didn't notice? They would have had to have stealth enabled to pull that off! Then Ed just handed his wife off to these strangers? And to be even more incredulous, Ed goes back to shore to get his car? Oh, H*CK NO! Ed must have early onset dementia! He just forgot he has a wife, who just got into a boat, with three strangers, and she was BUTT NAKED! And Ed's just going to drive around to the marina and wait for them? Ed sure is a trusting soul. 1☆

Somehow or other they happened to be 75 yards off shore from a deserted beach, had sex with each other; then a boat appeared out of nowhere which she got onto. She then proceeded to have sex with a set of complete strangers, male and female. Husband seemingly vanishes into thin air. Have I got it right so far?

Chapter 1 Sunset Cruise

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It's one thing to put the chapter number at the beginning of a story instead of the title, but it takes real work to bury in in the story. So, which one don't you give a fuck about, your own story or the readers?

Wow there’s a lot of negative comments! Personally I enjoyed it, it would make more sense with a following on. There has to be a reason why her husband is fine with her getting on the boat? He was paying off a debt? Blackmailed? Or perhaps he knew them and was fulfilling one of her fantasies with the recording for the couple to enjoy together later on?

Getting DP fucked (done properly) is mind blowing.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

I didn't really care for this story and agree that fetish was probably a better choice of categories, but the previous anon with the all-caps and explanation points kinda blew up his own argument. The definition he provided clearly says "Married extra-marital fun." This story clearly fits.

Major slut!

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Too bad a rouge Japanese sub couldn’t put a couple of Longbow torpedoes into the Whore Boat.

Why are so many writers here gay?

basically a rape

No need to read the story.

Comments say it all.

I hate cuck stories.

Not sure fucking your wife in public in front of three men then sending naked to hang out with them qualifies as anything other than sharing. Good story. Sequel? Ed’s reward?

Oh, who is surprised that the moron who writes in all caps and exclamation points commented about the wrong category? No one.

Hey Dipshit! You, yourself posted the description of the category. Remember "Married Extra Marital fun"? Well, there was a lot of it in this story. Now shut the fuck up and go away.

There were plans for additional chapters that would have provided logical answers for all of the issues raised by commenters. But the environment here is so toxic, that I think I will look for alternate avenues to publish my stories.

This was bad and made no sense. You can't submit crap and then complain that the responses are toxic. 1*