All Comments on 'The BodyGuard Bk. 01'

why did you kill kay :'( i cant read the next few books now :( i loved your writing up until the end ..............

Excellent tale, but that she is dead where will the love interest come from?

4/5

Great story and writing, but sloppy. Tenses shifting within phrases or paragraphs, typos, grammar, comma's where none belong and none where they do. Very amateuristic, really, i almost gave up reading. All to the point it gets confusing sometimes and also it takes me out of the story. Then the story just got me and i kept on. But still a shame. Editing definitely recommended.. 4* but on the verge of 3. Edited would make 5.