All Comments on 'The Bondage Catering'

I really enjoyed reading this story and would love to read further chapters.

Please do not end it here.

... there is a lot you could do with this story and I would dearly love to read more. Will five stars help change your mind?

To reinforce the previous comments. I would like to read more of this.

Thank you.

Really enjoyed your story. Hope you will write more. Thank you.

Naive but forthright girl with her own agenda.

Older Roué' with history but continued interest.

The ingredients for Many scenarios to explore.

So much potential you might want to challenge other writers

To share your context and explore heir own directions . :-)

More please!

Please keep writing. I loved the buildup of their relationship.

I loved the build up - and the eventual climax was amazing !

Loved it !

Really enjoyed the story can't wait for the follow up

You have done it again, the stories keep on getting better and better. Thank you very much.

I am not so much into bondage but this made me so wet...I want to meet this man!

I hope you are planning on continuing this story

Very good. I like it alot.

Really sorry not to find more chapters here--this is masterful writing, and very arousing as well. Nice. Maybe she will develop a "full service" bondage catering business, for some of his friends as well??

Five is not enough stars for this story. I'm talking like 35 stars!!!!!! All your stories are wonderful in their own way but this one truly has a special place in my heart.

Please keep writing.

I enjoy your writting. The flow feels natural and effortless. I can't wait to read more.

Josie

Love this story id give 10 stars if i could.

It might feel it was a little fast, but my god how well written!

Feel John missed a trick with his writing as he could have discussed Emily's feelings about the experience in more depth, which in turn would help her reconcile everything in her mind.

I would love to read more about their developing relationship.

I have a sneaky suspicion that Emily would develop into a powerful switch.

Once again, HeyAll, you’ve hit the nail on the head. I enjoy dom/sub stories very much, and you do an excellent job with them. There is the added pleasure of reading something that is written well, unlike rather too much on Lit. One small point, you say early in the story that John wants Emily to prepare lunch and dinner. But I saw no mention of the evening meal; I have understood that to be a minor oversight by the author 😴 . As usual with your stories, well worth all of the available five stars, more if I could.

This stir as so hot and vivid. It showed the beginning of a sexy BDSM relationship